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mascara tears
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:46:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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crimson ashes line the floor,
remnants of my trial of heart,
burning holes through my soul,
invisible scars mark my visage,
from the tears that stung my cheeks,
and the pain of locked up hurt,
rising to the surface,
letting out the pain in my heart,
I fell...
mascara tears...
it felt good to let it all go,
but I wanted to lose it forever,
I wanted you to steal my pain,
but you brought me back,
I didn't think I could face another day,
but I decided to give life another chance,
for your love is one thing keeping me alive,
saving a soul that has lost all hope,
don't leave me...
I don't want to be alone...
thankyou...
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2004-04-26 12:46:23]
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Re: mascara tears
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by Stitch on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:48:54 PM AEST
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A stirring write. Love the images of stealing pain and burning holes through my soul. Good stuff. Praying for you.
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Re: mascara tears
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:54:47 PM AEST
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| great poem. you expressed your emotion in a superior way. the title is good too. i hope get over your problems. best wishes deathrop. |
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Re: mascara tears
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:58:35 PM AEST
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a powerful write, filled with deep emotion and saddness. a truly great write.
well done.
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Re: mascara tears
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:08:49 PM AEST
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life is precarious; and when next you blink twil be yesterday, live each moment to the fullest:) hugs n' love nessa x
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Re: mascara tears
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:57:36 PM AEST
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This is beautiful.... and you're very welcome.
hang in there. All hope is not lost. |
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Re: mascara tears
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:40:11 PM AEST
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Its always good to reason the bad. And it's always even better when you have support. I'm glad your still here cause your poetry and your presense would be greatly missed. Thank you for these bittersweet MaSCaRa tears. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: mascara tears
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:26:36 AM AEST
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Pain has a way of revolving and tears will knock upon your hearts door when you don't want company. Remember that the future is so bright it would make your adrenalin rocket to the moon. Good things are waiting you, I know it.
Chin up, you aren't alone.
When your famous, remember me...
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Re: mascara tears
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by silent on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:33:15 AM AEST
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:) You'll be okay. Nice expression
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Re: mascara tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:58:26 PM AEST
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| This is just such a vivid, fresh word-picture. Incredible feeling outpouring.....wow. |
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