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Empathy
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:04:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sad little girl.
Black and white.
In the corner.
Crying.
Sad little girl.
Cut and bleeding.
Lost without hope.
Dying.
Sad little girl.
Deluded and high.
In the sky.
Flying.
Sad little boy.
Silent and empathetic.
Watching her.
Crying.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-04-26 11:04:08]
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Re: Empathy
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by reilt on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:06:47 AM AEST
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| oh how sad...i thought this was great and beautifully written...hope the sad little boy can helpthe sad little girl be happy again |
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Re: Empathy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:32:40 AM AEST
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I can only hope he has the emotional strength to pull her from the tangled web she is in. This is a great expression of caring and concern. Well written piece.
Rita |
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Re: Empathy
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:17:56 PM AEST
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| well written piece. full of emotion and expression. watching is easy, helping isnt. but which is more useful? |
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