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Lament
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:32:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We walked into despair
You and I...
Concrete meets.
These stone walls
Surround us,
No return.
You have no idea
How the ideas shifted
Between bricks and mortar
And cracked
Without a murmur
Or fear of being discovered.
We just met it dead on,
Lacking knowledge,
Careless, Wreckless.
Bruised heads,
Broken hearts,
You and I
Lament.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-26 10:32:43]
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Re: Lament
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:08:06 AM AEST
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oh i love your use of words in this.
so well done. i loved this.
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Re: Lament
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by bernard on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:14:18 AM AEST
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Well written poem I can sympathise with such feelings although I am fortunate enough to have lovely wife and a good marriage.
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Re: Lament
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by Stitch on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:01:17 PM AEST
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This is excellent. I've got nothing on you. A well-crafted work.
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Re: Lament
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:03:37 AM AEST
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| oooo moving write, touched my heart, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lament
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:57:28 AM AEST
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| It's easy to live the feeling of this poem--this seems a particularly well articulated work. |
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