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Not I
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:28:37 AM in AEST
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Meet with the stranger
Down the street
10 times removed
A fraction.
Broken and remoulded,
Shaped or mis-shaped,
Misunderstood,
Represented or misinterpreted,
Imperfect?
Versions too scarce to recognise.
Alien images congregate
At the dark end...
She, Her, Third person...But
Not I.
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2004-04-26 10:28:37]
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Re: Not I
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:10:15 AM AEST
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interesting.
i like it.
again a wondeful use of words.
keep it up.
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Re: Not I
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by bernard on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:05:52 PM AEST
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A masterly use of words you are indeed a wordsmith. Great poem.
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Re: Not I
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:44:22 PM AEST
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| Do not let life make you who it wants you to be rise above, and don't be afraid |
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