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Letting go
Contributed by
silent
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:40:30 AM in AEST
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You look so lovely to me, surrounded by pain
Madness, an escape for all around
I see myself alive and well
For I, have found myself
You have found my shadow
Goodbye my love
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Re: Letting go
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:59:43 AM AEST
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this is a poem that breathes, these images and what it does to me are pure essense of poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Letting go
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by LiquidChaos on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:31:50 AM AEST
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| awesome. very sad...i can understand the feelings. keep it up! |
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Re: Letting go
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by reilt on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:42:35 AM AEST
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| beautiful and so heartbreaking...you have captured the emotion wonderfully...well done. i think you have written an amazing poem |
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Re: Letting go
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:37:58 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet, so sad. i really like this. phil |
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Re: Letting go
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:21:50 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Letting go
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:16:35 AM AEST
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| I know and understand so well, beautiful write. thanks much |
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Re: Letting go
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:35:59 AM AEST
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blessed are those who can say it in few words. excellent!
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Re: Letting go
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:37:36 AM AEST
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So sad, that we only see the shadows of our beloved... Who you really are is far too much to grasp for many people...
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Letting go
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:10:21 AM AEST
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Ouch. The joy of revenge coupled with the relief of letting go. Nice stuff. I appreciate your brevity. You have said a great deal in a very few words. BRAVO!
Stitch |
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Re: Letting go
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:28:55 AM AEST
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short but impressive.
so well written.
a amazing write.
well done i enjoyed it .
Arden |
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Re: Letting go
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:18:40 PM AEST
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Wow... Silent....just Wow... You really feel and express. It's purely honest, purely bitter, lovely hatred.
I love it! One of your best!
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Re: Letting go
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:09:56 PM AEST
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| wow ... this has such few words... but so much meaning......... |
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Re: Letting go
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:05:28 AM AEST
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Woah. Nice stuff. What a beautiful and powerful way to say it.
Stitch |
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Re: Letting go
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:28:08 AM AEST
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| wow this is really good .... very few words draw such emotion... and such pain... good work !! |
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Re: Letting go
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:46:54 AM AEST
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Dear Silent,
What have you been up to while I was away>
I can see from this poem that you have not gone astray. What powerful words, they must be deserved indeed. I've never quite seen you in this mood before, but it's decisive and you'll see her no more. That's a good quality, so many people now days can't stand for anything.
This was a poem of few words, Silent, but you meant them......that's what counts
love
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