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fly-by-night
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:56:57 AM in AEST
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~§Î£¥ÉR MØØÑ §ÎG§~
just one more fool
with some paper and a pen,
living on errant dreams again,
yet people cannot see them,
one heart's masolium,
because out there winds still blow,
thunder cracks; writer's flow,
ahh, mosaic of emotions,
soul sounds soft and sonorous,
stunning rainbow,
beautiful, true and heartfelt,
oh, that i were all soul, to melt,
for love cannot live by wishes
alone, nor promise's misses,
but down to the marrow
of one's bones; nor empty
dreams, strong must be its seams,
quenched by a nights full moon,
dance of perfect harmony,
tangible with honesty.
§* *§
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Re: fly-by-night
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:03:33 AM AEST
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Masterpeice!
luv the graphics.
Very creative write.
luv, huggs,
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:08:58 AM AEST
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oh WOW!!!
that is amazing...
the imagery is sooo vivid...
I'm pretty sure had I been older I would have enjoyed it more dammit...
but still it like--took me away to another place...
wow-o-wow!
I wish I could write like you..
I'm NOT jealous, just envious...
ok, I think I'll go and cry in the corner with envy now...
awestruck 12 year old girl,
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:33:10 AM AEST
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awesome
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Re: fly-by-night
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by venkat on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:35:40 AM AEST
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| Nessa..this is an interesting write..O.k dear..I enjoyed it's read..:-) venkat |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:27:43 AM AEST
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Sweet reverie, wonderful images!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:31:24 AM AEST
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| another awesome poem...this was so great....*re-reads* =P |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by silent on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:08:20 AM AEST
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hmm, little cryptic huh. Have to read it a few times, but so far it's very good. Have to say though the picture is awesome, wow...
Silent |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:27:48 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this is spectacular. I'm in total awe. I loved it. Excellent picture, with an even more excellent write. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by reilt on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:03:24 AM AEST
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| i am speechless...wow, wow and wow. an amazing write. i'm not sure there are enough superlatives to describe this poem...breathtaking...thank you |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:29:32 AM AEST
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Stunning, Nessa, absolutely undeniable stunning. Your words are pieced perfectly and your choice of graphic was sensational. I admire your work so much and the inner soul it stems from.
Rita |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Bongo on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:44:45 PM AEST
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A message acknowledged
Down to earth and honest. |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:35:45 PM AEST
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Wonderful! Beautiful... wow. Loved the picture.
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:16:47 PM AEST
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Another masterpiece here.
A friend who cares.
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Re: fly-by-night
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:27:56 PM AEST
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Gary is actually home whiole Im reading this and I called him to read this masterpiece with me. He says five thumbs up!! I say bravo!!
michelle |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Merry on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:15:30 PM AEST
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some people have no clue what is important nor how to express their feelings - they are the ones who surround themselves with worldly possessions that are void of any feeling - and the poetess shines in moonlight, silver mist and shadow - she is the power of one
a very fitting write sis -
hugs
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:29:13 PM AEST
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The first line is hit me...and the rest of it washed me away in thoughts. This is beautiful.....and painful to read.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:33:44 PM AEST
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oh wow, very beautiful vivid imagery in this write. the picture was sooo pretty, i loved it. the flow of the poem was so smooth. this was just stunning. i loved this. well done yet again.
Arden |
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Re: fly-by-night
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:11:21 PM AEST
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Heh, the poem you read called Upon the back of Scourge was by me, lol funny it was you who commented. There was some server problems with the submit poetry thingy n it went under Submit_News for some reason. Err...im doing 2 things at once...I have an Acid Planet song playing..lol i forgot what your poem was about...gotta read it again...nice writing once again this time on the ever popular topic of love. I like the part where you say "oh, that i were all soul, to melt" thats a cool image of a melting soul. What you write it true that love has to be "down to the marrow
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Re: fly-by-night
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 17th February 2015 @ 08:54:06 AM AEST
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Love(!!!) this! I am trying to pick out my favourite stanza, or at least a favourite line, but this is like eye candy. Wow!
~Scorp |
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