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Hatebreed
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:54:51 AM in AEST
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Broken down to reality
Maybe seeming possibly
Tragic, evil is your stare
Deprived, I take you there
Ask me for vengeance
Lost all significance
Expressing all of what we will
Taking back even still
Heckled, struggling through the gate
I urge you calming, destroyed by hate
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Re: Hatebreed
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by Rylo on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:06:45 AM AEST
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| Great read, thanks for sharing it |
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Re: Hatebreed
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:46:56 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem, especially the last 2 lines. Your style is interesting as well.
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Re: Hatebreed
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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nice poem I like the band called Hatebreed. I liked the line, "Deprived, I take you there", that was funky... added some sort of creepiness to it.
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