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believe not
Contributed by
SuperAsh16
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:49:03 AM in AEST
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empty lies and brokem promises
are all that ive recieved
for all my sweat and blood and tears
for something i believed
they say he's good
they say he's great
but what has he done
to alter my fate?
my fate of loneliness
tears and depression
psychosis and panic
vacant expressions
nothing, i say
nothing at all
instead he'd got me running
down a never-ending hall
of anger, frustration
empty rooms
locked doors, no end
prolonged doom
but i can get free
free from his hell
i can break through
i can save myself
so you can be inspired
to save yourself too
from him they call god
not billy, jane, or sue
you can be yourself
and not worship a fictious guy
you can be unique
and not live life by a lie
i hope that i have helped
to give you new direction
i hope that you can live
with a happy disposition...
Copyright ©
SuperAsh16
... [
2004-04-26 00:49:03]
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Re: believe not
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:00:43 AM AEST
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Really shows your struggle with your beliefs and I hope it all works out for you in the end in a way that makes you happy.
P.S. Since I didn't say it in my last post, Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: believe not
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:17:54 AM AEST
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Welcome.
Very interesting write.
luv, huggs,
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Re: believe not
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by Remi on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:49:21 PM AEST
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alot of poeple struggle with their beliefs u won't be the first nor the last believe me, but good write
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