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IF I WERE A BIRD
Contributed by
mooshell
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:36:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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IF I WERE A BIRD I WOULD FLY HIGH,
FLY HIGH INTO THE BRIGHT BEAUTIFUL SKY,
FOR THERE WOULDN'T BE NO HEIGHT I WOULDN'T TRAVEL,
ONLY EXCITED TO REACH THAT NEXT MILE,
I FEEL AS IF ALL PROBLEMS HAVE BEGAN TO UNRAVAL,
ON MY FACE A SMILE,
COOL WIND IN MY HAIR,HOPE IN MY EYES,
FOR NOW THERE'S NOTHING I COULDN'T BARE,
THE BEAUTY IN PEOPLE, THE EARTH, AND SOUL, NEVER DIES,
MY BODY FEELS LIGHT,
I'M FLING SO HIGH,
THIS FEELING I WON'T TRY TO FIGHT,
OR QUESTION WHY,
I FEEL SO FREE AND LOVED,
IF I WERE A BIRD, I WOULD FLY HIGH,
FLY SO HIGH, INTO THE BEAUTIFUL BLUE SKY
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2004-04-26 00:36:37]
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Re: IF I WERE A BIRD
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by blondie_64865 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:46:25 AM AEST
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| Your poem has alot of expression and emotion it. It truely reflects that alot of people feel and think on the inside but to afraid to speak aloud in fear of people thinking differently of them. Very impressive poem |
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Re: IF I WERE A BIRD
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:56:24 AM AEST
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I like the free-flung exhiliration of this. Nice work.
Rita |
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Re: IF I WERE A BIRD
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:21:08 AM AEST
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| very pretty, warm welcome to ypdc, hugs n' love nessa |
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