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The Carousel Spins
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:29:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I feel like ah ghost
cause
like a fifth elment
no one knows i exsist
whenever i talk
no one hears a sound,
the routine of the life
dominates
Replays of the day
keeping me awake...
when i am in need of a friend
there is never anyone around.
Wanna scream wanna cry
wanna start all over
wanna know why
I EXSIST!!!!
memories slowly fade
visons of today
are all that remains....
Off balance
on thee edge of ah cliff
confusion clouds what is real
never sure
of what i really feel.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-04-25 23:29:15]
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Re: The Carousel Spins
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:54:27 PM AEST
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Wow now this is sad and very deep.
U captured your subject well.
Hang tuff, my friend.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy
This one could bring tears.
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Re: The Carousel Spins
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:20:08 AM AEST
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i think we all feel like this sometimes, after all we are human; nothing is easy, brilliant poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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