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Our Love
Contributed by
Rylo
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:43:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If love came in the form of diamonds
Yours would be the brightest of all
For it keeps me standing tall,
And my back is never against the wall
Your love always keeps me feeling warm
And keeps me sheltered
Even through the worst of storms
And the love that I give back
Lets you know, that you never have to keep track
For I will never do your wrong
And I will always keep you
Standing strong
You are my friend, my lover, my world, and my wife,
And I am yours for the rest of my life
This love we share, could never die,
For it is more beautiful, than a moonlit sky
Being with you
Is like having a constant high
And I thank you, for keeping it alive
2004 Copyright BY: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-25 22:43:40]
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Re: Our Love
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:53:32 PM AEST
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WoW Ron This Is An Amazing Write About LOVE ....This Is Really Good ....
Loved It From Begining To The Very End :-) Keep Em Coming
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: Our Love
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by arden on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:53:46 PM AEST
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oh i loved this one.
so beautifully written and amazing.
you did a wonderful job.
well done, keep up the awesome work!
Arden |
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Re: Our Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:32:15 PM AEST
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Oh yea!! he is writing love poems again and not creepy vampires. This is a great write. It is full of warmth, love and caring. I like you better this way. LOL
Rita |
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Re: Our Love
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:24:22 AM AEST
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U may not be married but if u keep writing like this u will be. Let me know if u ever start taking applications.......smilee.
Very good write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Our Love
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by blondie_64865 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:16:57 AM AEST
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| reading your poem is very emotional and it really says alot about love. Even though your not married your heart and thoughts about love are in the right place. |
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Re: Our Love
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:39:30 AM AEST
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although you are not married...you have writtent he words many women would love to hear from their husbands...good write
Shari |
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Re: Our Love
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by jaeann on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:54:20 PM AEST
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| like having a constant high........yeah.....that sums it up........married or not..........awesome words....... |
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Re: Our Love
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:35:54 PM AEST
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amasing write Ron Im confused as to why you arent married my friend any woman would love to have this kind of love and romance in their life from their husband!!
Love ya
Michelle |
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