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BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
Contributed by
xSlashXPrettyXSkinx
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:30:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Knot tied with poisonous intentions
Noose hung with wordless mentions
Fire burning inside the skin
A lifetime of unprecribed pain will win.
Softly massage the memories away
It takes a clear mind to die this way
Place the rope around my already broken neck
Always been told I played short of a full deck.
Suicide devine, mind revenge strays
Close the curtains to hide my body from the peaceful day
Climb on the chair, grasped to the ceiling
Placing myr hope in reality, letting going of feeling.
The chair falls away, as I hang motionless
Images of life flash sweet devotionless
Mesmerizing the way this feels
Hanging there silent, as my innocense it steals.
Copyright ©
xSlashXPrettyXSkinx
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2004-04-25 22:30:58]
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:33:54 PM AEST
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| This is really sad, but really well done! Made me tear up! |
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:27:10 AM AEST
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I agree that it is sad but it also very beautifully written. It had great imagry. Good write.
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by silent on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:03:12 AM AEST
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You certainly write with alot of insight ;)
Last lines are true but disturbing.....Great poem
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:43:42 AM AEST
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| really, really good poem! i love it. |
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by lonely_kakashi on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:07:48 AM AEST
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Great poem, really gives me mental pictures of someone doing it, i'd rather be slitting my wrists :)
:D
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:53:07 PM AEST
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excellent, vivid, tragically mesmerizing from title to last line:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:59:33 PM AEST
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your talent is amazing.
such true raw emotion. i am a fan now.
cant wait to read more.
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:32:38 PM AEST
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| I agree. Awsome poem! The words you chose to write this piece... I can't explain. They helped describe the scene much better than if some other person had attempted to write this. Great job!!! Look forward to reading more! |
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe
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by deadbloodyrose on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:22:45 PM AEST
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| another wonderful one.. i really like ur writings.. you have a lot of talent and you should keep writing... i relate to them so well and love reading your poems.. AMI JO |
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