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nice
Contributed by
footballjon51
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:52:08 PM in AEST
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i saw her
and said nice
as she walked
down the long hall
i followed
like a fool
bad idea
now i am serving
many years
in alkratraz
for what
nothing just
looking at
a nice beutiful
GIRL
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footballjon51
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2004-04-25 19:52:08]
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Re: nice
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:56:43 PM AEST
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Well thank goodness its not normally a prison sentence or the prisons would be filled!
Liked your poem.
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Re: nice
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:02:56 PM AEST
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Well, thank God this is fiction. Otherwise there wouldn't be a man walking free! LOL
Funny write, really.
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Re: nice
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by Merry on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:12:45 AM AEST
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amusing poem - I liked it, you have an interesitng point of view
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