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I Once Was
Contributed by
Ramuel
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I once was,
And forever
Will be the one cause;
And all because never
Did I ever pause to hear
What you to say, and had I
Used my ears, I would have known your fear;
I need you so much I can’t let you go -
But I didn’t listen, and now if you die,
I don’t know how I’ll continue on by myself;
Alone in this place that is so odd to my senses;
Strange colors float through insipid skies full of dark trenches;
Aspersions thrown at me from the menacing landscape engulf
My thoughts with a sense of dread… all I can think of is you…
However, you’re holding on by a splinter I knew
You would find, and now if I follow my senses
I can rescue and bring you back from the brink;
I‘ll then have to lower my defenses,
And to you I must form a new link,
So again in me you may trust,
And together continue
Through this, this land of rust
And dust, on because
I know just who
I once was.
Copyright ©
Ramuel
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2004-04-25 19:22:01]
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Re: I Once Was
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:54:48 PM AEST
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A poem filled with emotion and sincerity.
Enjoyed reading this one.
Kie |
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Re: I Once Was
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:23:52 PM AEST
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| Such a sweet poem and ur words jumped out at me from the computer. I loved this. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: I Once Was
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:55:33 PM AEST
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Nice poem... full of emotion and longing...
ur words do jump off the comp screen and grab the person reading... nice write... thanks for sharing ... keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: I Once Was
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:56:56 PM AEST
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Nice poem... full of emotion and longing...
ur words do jump off the comp screen and grab the person reading... nice write... thanks for sharing ... keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: I Once Was
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by bobbyclay56 on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 07:05:36 PM AEST
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| A cute little dark forboding poem that pinches your arm in the middle of the night while your dreaming and wakes you up to be read again. |
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