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For Susan Some More
Contributed by
alasdaircairns
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like sunshine unrefined by might,
My love for you is pure delight,
With pastures green and futures bright,
My love and I await the night.
Whilst shephards tend their peaceful sheep,
I hold you closer while we sleep,
You'll never lose my heart, Bo Peep,
The feelings in my heart, so deep.
For everyday I spend with you,
Just feels so fresh, so warm and new,
The painter danced, the dancer drew,
As lovers gazed at skies so blue.
Like moonshine unobscured by cloud,
My love for you is real and proud,
As angels trumpet songs of joy,
The perfect girl loved by this boy.x
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alasdaircairns
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2004-04-25 18:29:37]
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Re: For Susan Some More
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:07:01 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem! Wonderful job! |
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Re: For Susan Some More
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by bernard on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:17:50 PM AEST
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Good rhyming poem. thanks for a delightful read.
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