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Innocence
Contributed by
Soulless
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:12:22 PM in AEST
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I hope the long nights hold you tightly
Though I have never felt so lost before
I still cling to the remaining shreds
Never looken down upon before
Those torn up pieces
Lay forgotten on the floor
I see them clearly now
They’re all I have left
Slowly now they disappear from my sight
But who am I to say I love you
I’m nothing but a thief who stole your heart
Traded mine for broken pieces of you
Those torn up shreds
Were only meant for you
Yet I stole them
I kept them as fragments of you
Those torn up pieces
Lay forgotten on the floor
I see them clearly now
They’re all I have left
I’m returning these tattered pieces
Forgive me, I couldn't see past my own reflection
But who am I to have a mirrored image
Forgive me, All I wanted
Was to fix my pieces broken
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-04-25 18:12:22]
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Re: Innocence
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:50:04 PM AEST
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ohhhh what a beautiful heartfelt poem, this really moved me, so much, simply brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Innocence
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:54:43 PM AEST
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to quote Ladyfawn this poem also struck me as beautiful and heartfelt thnx for sharing this with us.
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Re: Innocence
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:09:41 PM AEST
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What An Amazing Heartfelt Write...So Beautiful !!!!!!! I Love It !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Innocence
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:14:07 PM AEST
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| Lovely and touching poem. Great write, but I'm not surprised, with your talent great poems should come naturally. |
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Re: Innocence
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:06:42 PM AEST
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| simply amazing. You have much talent. |
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