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IF I EVER LOST YOU!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Monday, 30th September 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you ever left me,
How destroyed I would be.
For I would be lost In a turbulent sea.
Up against rocks , Waves crashing toward me.
In Davie Jones locker
At the bottom of the sea.
If I ever lost you!
If you ever say One final goodbye,
My heart would just stop beating,
And I wouldn’t care why.
While inside the ambulance
They’re pumping my chest.
The only thing escaping
Is your name on my lips.
If I ever lost you!
If you ever turned
And walked out my door.
And right then I realize
I will see you no more.
There wouldn’t be a bridge
Or mountain too high.
That would keep me from jumping
While your name I would cry.
If I ever lost you!
Copyright ©
Robert_Edgar_Burns
... [
2002-09-30 20:30:00]
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Re: IF I EVER LOST YOU!
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:35:55 AM AEST
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Very nicely written. There was a great love that you were losing and you did it justice by writing about it
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Re: IF I EVER LOST YOU!
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by kimbo on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 12:39:08 AM AEST
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| thankyou for sharing this poem with us all very well written and the layout is good really enjoyed it keep up the good writing |
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Re: IF I EVER LOST YOU!
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by Kirby on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 06:06:07 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem, it may be in an srchive but who cares. I like it! It reminds me of me right now!lol! |
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