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It is Here
Contributed by
devil_child
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:14:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Ice as cold as winter
Wind as strong as steel
Ground as tough as the soul
Heart as pure as the inoccent
It is here you will find adventure
It is here you will find yourself
Days as dark as shadows
Love as close as your fears
Family as far away as your kindness
Inspiration as near as your forgivness
It is here you will find adventure
It is here you will find yourslef
Come into this place, it is here I will mold you
And you will find what you so deeply desire
You will conquor the land of your enimies
You will sour on the wings of your intelligence
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devil_child
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2004-04-25 16:14:55]
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Re: It is Here
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:18:45 PM AEST
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Oh I really liked this one. You had a couple of spelling errors but not enough to take away from the unique quality of this poem.
Kie |
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Re: It is Here
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:50:44 PM AEST
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Dark, but not dark... mysterious quality ... yes...
liked it... heck no... loved it would be more approperiate...lol
U did good... keep writing..
~Donna~ |
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Re: It is Here
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:00:51 PM AEST
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| I've been there and you don't want to go there with me...it's not something that is open to the public. Excellent ,thought provoking. |
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