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Exodus
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:43:26 PM in AEST
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oops
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The exodus lays it's dream
As exodus' aren't what they seem
Genius as the exodus was
The exodus grew sad again, just as it always does
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Re: Exodus
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:35:47 PM AEST
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It's different but sad...
The only question I have is why so short. It seems as if there should be more(to me). |
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Re: Exodus
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by alwys2nv on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:35:52 AM AEST
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| good job, nicley written |
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