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Softly Ripples
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:25:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~*Sigsations*~
Softly as ripples of the night and day and night...
oh, coyotes, yip and yip across frosted moonlight,
Squirrels crack nuts and leave upon stumps shells
every direction takes path to the woods deep wells,
Great moaning melodies from oak branches and limbs
Silence in the air and the fragrant crisp earth she sings,
Swift, high above the river, keen the clever crows flies
blackbirds visit grains neglected apple parts goodbye,
Noble creature palamino mare, breath upon my face
friend she listens as I speak in judgement nay no trace,
as softly the ripples of the night and day and night...
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ladyfawn
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:29:03 PM AEST
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Oh Ness.....I'm glad you reposted this..and the pic is so divine...
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by badlander on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:31:01 PM AEST
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| ahhhhhhhhhhh...,, tranquil, calming, beautiful.Thanks for sharing. tony |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:32:21 PM AEST
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The picture is pure beauty in all it's forms and the poem, the poem was really touching and magical. I love your nature poems, they seem to point out what each and every one of us relates to...Even when everything else gets bad around you, go outside, be amongst the always wonderful sky, tree, earth. Wonderful Nessa, I'm so glad you reposted this.
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:34:17 PM AEST
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a wonderful scene painted to ease a weary soul...lovely
Shari |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:38:07 PM AEST
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This was magical. The flow and rhyme complimented each other. The title was perfect for the poem. I could quote each and every line because this was fantastic to read.
Kie |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:57:03 PM AEST
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Nessa, this softly ripples through my mind. How lovely this piece is. Thank you for reposting it for those of us that had not read it.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:22:51 PM AEST
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Nessa, this is beautiful.
I'm happy you reposted it. I don't think I read it the first time. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by Soulless on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:14:11 PM AEST
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Wow, your enchanting words just dance so perfectly into my ear when I read it out loud. I love the rythme and majesty of this poem.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by Merry on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:58:07 PM AEST
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Absolutely fantastic - I think this is one of my favorites of yours -
hugs and smiles and daisies
merry |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by arden on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:15:42 PM AEST
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the imagery was stunning. written like a pro.
just awesome. i loved every word.
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:35:50 PM AEST
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Nessa Thanks For Reposting....Absolutely Stunning Imagery And A Fabulous Write..
********LoVe***AnGeL*********
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:36:20 PM AEST
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| I felt so relaxed when I read this, it was so soothing. The words blended so well together, like Kie said it complemented each other. The imagery was excellent. Good job. :) |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by secretwind on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:59:40 AM AEST
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| This flows so sweetly....Well done. |
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Re: Softly Ripples
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 22nd February 2015 @ 11:42:53 AM AEST
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So beautiful! A little on the sensual side... Maybe I'll go take a nature walk ^_^
~Scorp |
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