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night vs day
Contributed by
rightwingbrknwing
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:14:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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the sunshine in its laughter seems to be tauting me,
as the darkness in it's stillness has comforting empathy
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2004-04-25 14:14:07]
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Re: night vs day
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:21:07 PM AEST
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I have no idea what a Haiku is either but I liked this poem alot! You said so much with so few words and that is impressive.
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Re: night vs day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:07:27 PM AEST
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This is so pretty, not a haiku, but very pretty. lol
A haiku has 3 lines.
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
A true haiku is always about nature or Japan but not all adhere to that. But the line syllables is what makes it a haiku.
Hope this helps,
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Re: night vs day
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:12:33 PM AEST
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| dear lord, too many damn rules, poetry should be about breaking them not creating them, oh well, thank you! |
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