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So Sorry to Hear I Died
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The flowers,
the deep crimson roses,
almost dead,
petals writhering consistantly,
with each passing moment.
The faces,
frail and sadened,
with tears,
streaming down both cheeks,
disbelief in their eyes.
The room,
clustered with photos,
some old,
some new,
all with a shadow of pain,
all of a young woman I once knew.
Me,
sleeping peacefully ,
hands sloftly clasped together,
a weak smile escaping my lips.
The Stranger,
apearing behind me.
"Unfortunate, isn't it?" He says.
"What happened?" I questioned.
He whispers menacingly in my ear.
A solemn stare.
"Oh." I reply to the secret.
"I am so sorry to hear that I died."
Smiling,
I back away into the shadows.
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2ndChance
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2004-04-25 13:40:30]
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Re: So Sorry to Hear I Died
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by fallensilence on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:44:14 PM AEST
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| theres some really good imagery in this poem. i liked reading it, but i wasn't so sure the title did it justice. thats just me though. great write altogethor though. -david |
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Re: So Sorry to Hear I Died
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:15:48 PM AEST
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| Thought this poem was one of great insight and thought....it touched me. |
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Re: So Sorry to Hear I Died
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by deadly_blaZe on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:01:13 PM AEST
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