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never be captured
Contributed by
spooky
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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no where to go, no where to run,,
no one to help or even help,,
living in silence,and darkness all around,,
sheltered in mind, captued in time,,
darkness has befallen you,
with silence to bind,,
never to see beauty,
or even to say I love you,,
but to hold and embrace,
with tenderness,,
isn't a sight to see,
but felt with heart,,
never give it a chance to capture you,
for you will never be happy,,
enjoy who you love,,
and whom your with,,
they will be there,
as long as you love them,,
with all our heart,,
love isnt something you see,it's felt with heart,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2004-04-25 11:31:36]
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Re: never be captured
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:37:01 AM AEST
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it is felt with the heart but also the death of love is felt with the heart...apathy is the toughest to deal with...do not judge others my friend...you know not their life
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Re: never be captured
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by JesusFreak313 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:40:23 AM AEST
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That's a great write! Very well written and described, though I'm not sure I completely grasp what you're trying to say. The beginning especially is slightly confusing, but it's very well written anyhow.
God bless,
Frances |
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Re: never be captured
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:47:34 PM AEST
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another beautifully honest poem, craig, i do hope your heart finds its long over due happiness, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: never be captured
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by Paddy on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:11:17 PM AEST
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| nicely written but not a fan i'm afraid |
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