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Untitled Love
Contributed by
eviegirl
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:41:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The soft of your touch, the feel
of your lips.
I imagine what it would be like if we kissed.
The brown of your hair, the peach
of your skin,
The strength of your arms
that I want to be in.
Your gold-brown eyes that stare straight into mine,
Your soft sensitive smile I
think is divine.
I love just watching you
walk across the floor,
My hear jumps when you
walk in the door.
Your voice so smooth I never want you to leave,
When you say things to me it gets harder to breath.
And when you finally slip your hand into mine,
This moment I keep forever
in time.
Copyright ©
eviegirl
... [
2004-04-25 10:41:49]
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Re: Untitled Love
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by luckycharm on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:52:56 AM AEST
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| This poem is so pretty. I know how you feel and I can relate to this so much. I like your work.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Untitled Love
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by fallensilence on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:16:24 AM AEST
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| this is a good poem. it does a very good job of describing that "perfect" moment". -david |
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Re: Untitled Love
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:07:54 PM AEST
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such a sweet wonderful poem...I am feeling the same way right now...except for the last sentence...that i will have to do sometime soon! Anyways...i really loved this poem it was just so delicate and pure. Love::;Kirby
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