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The Storm
Contributed by
eviegirl
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:33:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I like the storm.
The thundering roars and the
rain pelts steadliy and strongly,
yet softly down,
and the harsh, brilliant flashes
of lightning,
nature acting out my emotions.
Sometimes a sense of calm,
nothing to fear,
Other times an uproar of raw emotions,
conjuring up inside me and
exploding out into the tumbling skys.
We are the storm.
The storm comforts me.
It lets me know,
I'm not the only one with
emotions.
I listen to it to make sense of
myself,
inside of me.
I am the storm.
The storm understands me.
As I project my feelings
to the world,
It knows me,
Acts accordingly,
as the barriers of my soul
come tumbling down,
It roars fiercely,
telling the world
in a valant display of me.
I know the storm.
I like the storm.
It shocks lives and rattles
foundations,
just the way I do.
Always new thoughts, new feelings,
new colors,
As I am swept away,
by my own self.
We are the storm.
Copyright ©
eviegirl
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2004-04-25 10:33:54]
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Re: The Storm
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by luckycharm on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:55:19 AM AEST
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| I like this poem as well. I like when it rains too, cause you can think about things. Nice write!!.-luckycharm. |
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Re: The Storm
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by silentrain07 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:32:46 AM AEST
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i love storms. i love rain...especially to just go outside and think about things while its raining..its so calming. i really liked this poem...it reminds me of how i feel when it storms here...which its about to right now!
-katie |
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Re: The Storm
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by JesusFreak313 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:02:24 PM AEST
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Wow! That's amazing! Very thought provoking. A great write.
God bless,
Frances |
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Re: The Storm
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:28:16 PM AEST
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| Storms are not all about rage... you've written such a revealing poem about the wonder of nature and the connection that we can share. I've really enjoyed this eviegirl.... have a good evening. June |
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Re: The Storm
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:29:40 PM AEST
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| Storms are not all about rage... you've written such a revealing poem about the wonder of nature and the connection that we can share. I've really enjoyed this eviegirl.... have a good evening. June |
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