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In The Woodlands
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:07:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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there you are deep in the woodlands
dancing where the fireflies abound
no one would even know you're there
if it wasn't for the baying of the hounds
you sprinkle all your magic dust
where it is needed most
the garden is your favorite spot
behind our house on the
eastern coast
what you do and where you go
it matters not to me at all
I only know it thrills me so when
I watch the faeries spring time ball
By Faith Mairee
? 2004 Faith Mairee (All rights reserved)
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Re: In The Woodlands
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by ChrisvanOostrom on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:14:10 AM AEST
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Mike Oldfield could have a field day writing the score to this poem. Ever listened to 'Ommadawn'? That's the mood your writing reminded me of.
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Re: In The Woodlands
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:36:24 AM AEST
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Enchanting write my friend! :o)
Very well done
Roses
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Re: In The Woodlands
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by bernard on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:36:47 AM AEST
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You sprinkle all your magic dust. That in itself tells a story. Fairies are not only in the woods but also in our gardens one may see them towards dusk when they fly from flower to flower closing the petals for the night. Lovely poem as usual FMtop marks from
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Re: In The Woodlands
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:48:32 AM AEST
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Your first one a lovely success too! This is very soft and magical, like all fantasy should be. You did great, my friend.
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Re: In The Woodlands
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:41:34 PM AEST
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You should consider writing more in this genre. It was a pleasure to read this. You have a most imaginative mind. Very well done.
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