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why am i still in this place you call life?
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:37:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hear myself screaming give it a rest.
I’m just so stressed.
Moods are my way out.
Yet there is a doubt.
Maybe I’m not stressed,
But depressed.
Now there’s a thought.
I’ve just become distraught.
Wanting the hardest way to die.
This is no lie.
Suicide is not easy you fool.
It is harsh and cruel.
Slit my wrist and bleed to death.
Your hardly hear my last breath,
Or maybe pills are easier,
No because this would cause a blunder.
I think I will just slit my throat and be done.
Next place you will ever see me, is in my
Coffin.
Copyright ©
little_genna
... [
2004-04-25 03:37:17]
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Re: why am i still in this place you call life?
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:53:16 AM AEST
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| well I just blundered my 4th try (sigh) and I did everything right. Someone evidently wants me alive. Please don't try any of the above..the aftermath is very ugly....I'm struggling with life, trying to find a reason to go on...poetry like yours helps...so keep writing; you can't with a slit throat....LOL |
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Re: why am i still in this place you call life?
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:22:22 AM AEST
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This is very sad.
Hope u get 2 feeling better realy soon.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, prayers,
emy
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Re: why am i still in this place you call life?
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:43:33 AM AEST
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| Liked the poem HATED THE SUBJECT lol. now now now. ever get in the mood write to me. here is a hug. but i also know that when your feeling this way you dont want someone like me to tell you good stuff but look up and see the god that loves you he will help you through. sandy |
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Re: why am i still in this place you call life?
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:58:19 AM AEST
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| i have felt such happiness, but i have also wanted to kill myself to many times.. i can relate to almost everything, it is wierd,this brought back memories.good write x |
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Re: why am i still in this place you call life?
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by silentrain07 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:30:40 AM AEST
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ive felt like this so many times beofre..then i realized how i had to live for...if this is truly how you feel dont go and kill yourself! this was a fine piece of writing..keep it up!
-katie |
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