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Sink Beneath my eyes
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:48:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If I touch her
Maybe she will dream no more
If I accept her
Maybe she will believe once more
She cannot sleep forever
Sometimes I stop and wonder
If she’s real or not
If I close my eyes
All of this will go away
She’s not breathing yet here she lies
Behind them she comes to play
I can’t help but wonder
If I touch her will she shatter
Draining out all the light
So then my demons will drink me
Keep me
So I cannot wake
She will not wake
Now I stop and wonder
Which of us is real or not
I can’t help but to ponder
Was she ever here or not
Yet again if I glance across her
She will soon start to fracture
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Re: Sink Beneath my eyes
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:08:17 AM AEST
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| Wow! Great job! Very nicely done! |
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Re: Sink Beneath my eyes
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:08:36 AM AEST
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very good poem I was getting worried as I had not seen anything from you in a while, but this allayed my fears. A beautiful write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Sink Beneath my eyes
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:31:24 AM AEST
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raw power in each word great job!
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Re: Sink Beneath my eyes
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:41:09 AM AEST
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The somewhat morbid, slightly ambiguous title drew me in...and what I found was indeed a very deep, detailed and cryptic poem. I had to read it over again, in order to fully appreciate it. And I thoroughly enjoyed it the first and second (and third) times through!
Truly,
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Re: Sink Beneath my eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:42:23 PM AEST
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very dark and just oooo! i love this, makes me wonder just how far the realm of love goes... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sink Beneath my eyes
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:18:30 PM AEST
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| Its great to read a new one from you. Dark and so perfectly worded. Great write. |
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