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Hell on earth
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:04:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Kill me now.
Ive spoken my piece.
Now I may rest.
Under 6 ft of smolten ash.
Just so I can catch my breath.
My ghost haunts these halls.
Looking and grasping empty souls.
True souls never die.
Why did I cry.
These tears I feel upon my face.
These rhythm goes flat.
Did my heart stop.
Or did you pull the plug.
The end of the end.
Mt life as I know it.
Perfection in my refelction.
Smoke and fire.
Now I can say that im truly in hell.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-04-24 22:04:48]
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Re: Hell on earth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:24:14 PM AEST
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Oh I hope you don't feel like this. Angst is such a defeating emotion. If you allow it to continue it will stop your personal growth and weaken your determination. You are strong and talented. Don't let it take over and defeat you. Your talent is immense but you need to come in out of the dark. Widen your horizons and let life in.
My best for you,
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Re: Hell on earth
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:14:34 AM AEST
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This was awesome Mortis. Wow... I know the feeling. Smoke and Fire. The end of the end. Perfect perfect! :) Thank you for sharing friend.
Love Lots,
Lindsey |
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