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My broken heart mess....
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:04:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Exuse me while I sweep the broken pieces of my heart off your hardwood floor
I tried to keep them nice and neat, and not to let them scattered from their heap,
but yet i could not handle anymore
They fell like fallen feathers so gracefully so slow
The pieces broke off one by one, each time it hurt some more
My tears have all but vanished
My mind's in disarray
I wonder why you had to tell me on this very day
My heart has slowly shattered, I no longer know what 's real
I can no longer even reconize how I really feel
My heart I gave to you to mend
To take away my pain
But yet the pieces go untouched, and my heart remain the same
I look around to watch you flee
Your heart is shattered too
The pieces are surrounding us and we dont know what to do
As I standing here sweeping the broken hearted mess
I stop to notice that you took ...the biggest pieces among the rest.
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-04-24 20:04:04]
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Re: My broken heart mess....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:16:52 PM AEST
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Just like a man, always has to have the biggest! Sounds like we are going through the same thing at the same time. Hope it gets better soon, for you.
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Re: My broken heart mess....
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by silent on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:42:21 PM AEST
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sad read, hope things improve soon for you, and a new chapter can begin.
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Re: My broken heart mess....
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:15:53 AM AEST
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| very sad..vivid and heart touching..venkat |
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Re: My broken heart mess....
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:57:19 PM AEST
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oh my god this was so sad.
written beautifully.
well done.
loved this.
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Re: My broken heart mess....
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:01:39 PM AEST
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HEARTBREAKER! REMEMBER YOU'VE GOT A HUGE HEART,WITH BIG PIECES THAT WILL NEVER PART!! FORGET THE WELDING OR THE GLUE,YOU'RE SO BRAVE & STRONG IN TIMES SO TRUE!!! HIS LOSS BUT YOUR HEART IS THE BOSS SO LIGHT THE FIRE & FOLLOW ITS LIGHT TO YOUR NEVER ENDING DESIRES!!!! GREAT POEM JENNY!!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: My broken heart mess....
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:41:12 PM AEST
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this deeply touched my heart, beautifully sad, hugs n' love nessa
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