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The move.
Contributed by
JimPoe
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:41:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Shes so beautiful, wonderful.
Your knees are weak your hands are shaking. You are afraid, afraid of what she thinks of you.
Step forward, one more step.
your closing in yet you are so far away.
Take the step, take the chance, move in and move on.
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JimPoe
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2004-04-24 19:41:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The move.
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:16:07 AM AEST (User
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This is good! Great job! |
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Re: The move.
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:22:46 AM AEST (User
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dont worry just go for it!! Great discriptions in this poem.
Michelle |
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