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Suicide
Contributed by
Piper
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 06:36:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I put the cold wet blade to my wrist
deeper the cuts go
trying to feel the pain
Im so lost
Im numb to the world
I wake up each day wish that this will be my last
I go to bed each night hoping not to wake
empty the bottle down my throat again
Maybe finally this will be the end of it all
The end of my pain
The end of my tears
No more yelling
Now only quiet
Turn up the Music
Close my eyes
Rest my weak head on the pillow
Just sleep
Oh no awake again
Just sick from the night before
Why cant it end
I cry to myself
This is an EVERY day thing
So press the blade again a little deeper
and do it all over again
Copyright ©
Piper
... [
2004-04-24 18:36:35]
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Re: Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 06:56:15 PM AEST
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| i can relate to this, im not suicidal either lol but i used to be. x |
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Re: Suicide
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 09:11:02 PM AEST
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Its a very good write, you've expressed feelings and thoughts well, even though they arent yours, if you know what i mean, cos you said you arent suicidal, so they are your thoughts but not... hmm doesnt make sense lol. Anyway keep it up.
- Stacy |
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