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Kill me now please
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:51:37 PM in AEST
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I remember it
Crying for your name
Pounding my skull
Punching my remains
Battered and bruised
Thick murky blood
I love you
Dreaming of your name
Whisper to me
You love me
Please shout to me
Do you need me like I need you
Kill me please grab me
Thrust your sword of lust in to me
Kill me now please
I love you
I would cry
But I will rise
I will kill myself
No you will not kill
I will kill myself
Please kill me kill me kill me
I hate your name
I will burn for you
I hate you
Please love me
Please love me
Copyright ©
williamdye
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2004-04-24 17:51:37]
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Re: Kill me now please
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:54:17 PM AEST
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wow I loved the repetition of 'kill me' and 'please love me' got across the emotion very well.
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Re: Kill me now please
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:49:41 PM AEST
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I DO NOT APPROVE OF THIS POEM
GEORGE W BUSH
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