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suicide
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I watch in disbelief
As the blood flows
Over my hand
And drips
Onto the earth
From the gash
Across my wrist.
I let the knife
Drop from my hand
And stick
Quivering
For an instant
Wedged point first in the ground.
A single drop of red
Leaves its scarlet signature
On the already
Tearstained note
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
... [
2004-04-24 16:55:17]
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Re: suicide
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by deadranger on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:04:16 PM AEST
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This is such a powerful poem,but please do not perform such a task. Because you would be robbing the world of true talent.
Andrew |
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Re: suicide
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:05:43 PM AEST
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| stitches and psyche wards are no fun, especially if you have to do it twice....anyway la la la good poem i like how you ended it...makes ya think |
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Re: suicide
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 09:06:27 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem, but you did a very good job at writing your emotions. I hope you get the chance to keep writing. Keep safe.
- Stacy |
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