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N.A.T.L.B.I.A
Contributed by
valek
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:20:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lost in this vicious circle of life
only to have you help me escape it
with a warmth in which you erased my strife
never again to look back in anger
as one of us leave nothing will change about you or me
nothing about this could be better
for when you come back you will be the only one i see
never again to look back in anger
when my life may be dark, you will be my only light
and bring me back into your loving arms
for only when i am with you, everything finally feels right
never again to look back in anger
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valek
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2004-04-24 16:20:42]
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Re: N.A.T.L.B.I.A
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by discantbelife on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:30:07 PM AEST
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| real nice peom keep it up |
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Re: N.A.T.L.B.I.A
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:47:52 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. It is so wonderful to finally find that one person in life that makes everything in yours right. Then all the anger and frustration of the past just disappears and the future is clear. I love this piece.
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Re: N.A.T.L.B.I.A
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:45:31 PM AEST
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such an incredibly beautiful masterpiece...i was deeply touched by words that sprang from your heart in true earnestness...your goodness shows through...excellent write!
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