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the memory of a broken man living in the past
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:10:35 PM in AEST
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the waning moon is set to catch the falling stars tonight
but should a star choose to end into the moon
it would start a fire as endless as the sun itself
and like my life that ended so long ago
you said it best when the words left your mouth
"its been a bad day today"
i think its best if we both went our seperate ways
i dont think i've even been slightly happy
i can't rid myself of this incurable disease buried so deep in me
this is the pain experienced when you hit the ground
was the feeling of flight really worth it?
"i'll be around"
she said, things will never change
i can't remember if you said that you loved me
if there is no memory then why does it linger
there were no feelings to express the ending
there are no tools for a heart that needs mending
but you left anyway, you left and went far away
"forget the memory of the silence"
but she screams:
i can remember when you tried to console me
where did that love in you go?
i am helpless in my lack of emotion
this is house is so empty without her
but the ending has left with her into forever
i live in the silence thats lived inside of me
it's pulled me under where the feelings i felt are no longer felt and the only comfort i own is collecting dust in the backend of yesterday
god, i would kill to feel complete again, so dont say
that theres nothing i can do because she left yesterday
the truth is i will die alone
i wish i could say here is comfort in emptiness
but there is only loneliness
let me use the same words again
cause i really dont care
and i can remember when you tried to convince me
that love is all there was.
liar.
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Re: the memory of a broken man living in the past
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:57:09 PM AEST
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Love it! great write once again. in your onw style and uniqueness this was very pleasing to the eyes.
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Re: the memory of a broken man living in the past
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by bernard on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:44:50 PM AEST
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Interesting write it catches a glimpse of unhappy longings. The last word of your poem say it all Liar.
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