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Lorelei Amaya
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:41:13 PM in AEST
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Lorelei Amaya holds within a gift from God
She’s humble to her compliments, accepts them with a nod
I thought I had a talent and then she walked through the door
She opens up her mouth and my heart sinks to the floor
Belting out a gospel chorus, a beauty to behold
Midas must have grazed her for she shines brighter than gold
Envious are everyone that feast upon her sight
An asset to her loveliness, her voice is pure delight
When the nerves encompass her nobody quite knows why
For she sings just like an angel with scarce a hint to try
I’ll tell her of the day I knew she had my everything
For my first wish above all else is simply the gift to sing
She’ll never quite believe me and she doesn’t think it’s true
But Lorelei Amaya, I just wish I could be you
She takes a breath and hugs us all as she walks out to the stage
A lump rises into my throat and the feeling’s hard to gage
Lorelei Amaya serenades a feisty song
As her eyes flicker like lightning ‘cause she isn’t quite that strong
For the music is like thunder in its echoes as it rolls
The power of such rhapsody is embedded into souls
The wind thrashes about her to galvanize her dress and hair
The siren’s impetuous passion saturates the room with flair
Lorelei Amaya breezes in and breezes out
It’s girls like her who just don’t see what they can bring about
I wish I were like Lorelei for music is my life
But all I’ll do is struggle with frustrating, painful strife
Maybe what I’m here to do is write the melody
The one that Lorelei can sing to set the music free
Perhaps in time I’ll find my voice and I can sing out too
Until then I’ll be inspired by the ones that are like you
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liquidsunshine
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2004-04-24 15:41:13]
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Re: Lorelei Amaya
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:52:12 PM AEST
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I wish i could sing! i was in a band once we were bloody awful! but i got the job as lead singer because 1) i couldn't play a musical instrument and 2) i was the only one who could remember the words! nice write!
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Re: Lorelei Amaya
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:02:12 PM AEST
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awwww beautiful. i wonder if she realises how amazing you think she is. she sounds like a wonderful person, but you do too, and I think you're maybe a lot more grounded and aware of what everyone else is feeling than her.
well done anyway lol
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Re: Lorelei Amaya
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:26:46 AM AEST
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This is a captivating description.
"For she sings just like an angel with scarce a hint to try"
I'd wager she can't write rhyme as good as this. And yes - I think you could write a good song for her - and may it be a beautiful thing. |
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Re: Lorelei Amaya
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:12:51 AM AEST
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FANTASTIC! What a wonderful testimony!
I love this. You are a special young woman. I didn't know you sang. My daughter sings, too. She has a recital today. BRAVO to you!
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Re: Lorelei Amaya
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:38:00 PM AEST
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Wow! I wish I could hear her sing!
Very eloquent. Well done!
Andrew |
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