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A Wanderer Well Scarred
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:39:01 PM in AEST
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I am a wanderer,
my paths have walked the worlds
my routes are tangled untold
my sights have seen it all.
I am well travelled,
journeyed beyond the gates
crossed the mighty straits
and climbed the frosted peaks.
I am embittered,
having seen all of guile's designs
been shown the cruelties of men
having felt the scourge of women.
I am tired,
my steps are in defeat
my trails in marshy deeps
my hopes are dashed to bits.
I am betrayed,
by friends or those I thought
even time does runneth out
and fate cares all for naught.
I am lost,
streetsigns they no longer print
landmarks have all gone since
and breadcrumbs I did not bring.
I am scarred,
my flesh are marked by wounds
my heart were stabbed by emotions
my dreams have long been silenced.
I am a wanderer,
a wanderer well scarred.
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baronhawk
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2004-04-24 14:39:01]
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Re: A Wanderer Well Scarred
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by deadranger on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:48:02 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem. You have a talent for affecting people.
Thanks for posting this.
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Re: A Wanderer Well Scarred
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:01:29 PM AEST
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I seem to say this a lot to peoples work, and it's beginning to sound a bit like a cliche but i can really identify with this. You learn as you grow, until you reach that higher self. Or the wise old owl stage as i prefer to call it!
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Re: A Wanderer Well Scarred
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:04:43 PM AEST
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I read your poem a couple of times and gosh I found it so sad and desolate.
It really touched my heart and left me wordless on how to respond.
So much pain in this poem.
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Re: A Wanderer Well Scarred
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:05:54 AM AEST
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time brings complication, complication brings pain(often)pain brings scars.
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