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My World
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:26:31 PM in AEST
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MY WORLD
Voices in my head, telling me stories
Pictures in my head, recalling memories
Noises in my head, exploding, sheer pain
This is my world, I am insane
What am I doing, I do not know
Voices in my head, telling me so
What do I see, I can't visualise
Pictures in my head, telling me lies
What's in your mind, will you help me
Release my thoughts, set me free
All my confidence, help me regain
You can't, this is my world, I am insane
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INSANITY
I've lost the place, I've lost the plot
My mind has gone, I've lost the lot
Void of thought, an empty brain
Now I'm finally, totally insane
Insanity is bliss, in my mind it's pure
For me there is no hope, there is no cure
Maybe I'm paranoid, schitzophrenic too
Perhaps I should be, a freak in a zoo
Thoughts just burst, into my mind
I don't look for them, me they just find
They may mean nothing, but here is the clue
It's me that is sane, but really are you
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-04-24 14:26:31]
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Re: My World
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:05:30 PM AEST
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| Interestng! Very well stated! |
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Re: My World
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:10:06 PM AEST
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Trust me the whole worlds insane not you! just 'cause us normal people are in a minority they've got it in for us! good work once again.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: My World
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:13:56 PM AEST
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i believe we are all insane. sanity is an illusion. a trend, something that society dictates. they say what is sane and what is not..so i do not believe in it. your not insane..because people understand
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: My World
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:44:53 PM AEST
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| well done, i enjoyed the read. |
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Re: My World
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:57:46 AM AEST
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youve lost sight of the simple things , i feel, like cheese and wine and fresh cut grass and rain, warm rain, summer rain.
*my opinion only* (and what does that count for?)
but i enjoyed reading it actually .. it was 'INSANE' |
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