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Fire
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:20:53 PM in AEST
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I'm surrounded by fire, like a burning fence
Choking and gasping, smoke and heat so intense
Crawling and grabbing, trying to get out
Enveloped by blackness, can't feel my way about
Skin melting and charring, raw meat cooking, well done
Screaming for help, reaching no one
Choke one last time, can't breath anymore
My body collapses, I crumble to the floor
Burnt alive, by death spitting fire
A pile of ashes, in my own funeral pyre
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-04-24 14:20:53]
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Re: Fire
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:50:06 PM AEST
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| Wow! Great poem! |
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Re: Fire
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:24:11 PM AEST
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amazing write, very sad too, i understand this. if you wanna talk pm me.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Fire
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 06:28:21 PM AEST
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i liked the imagery in this very intense. Very good write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Fire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:43:45 AM AEST
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good write
sort of lends itself to rap |
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Re: Fire
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by corpsman2000 on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 08:29:52 PM AEST
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Wow!!
Intense!!! Amazingly written, and i agree, would make a good rap, lol |
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