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I love the way...
Contributed by
SwEeTpOeT288
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I love u more than anything
and more than anybody ever will
Because When i'm with you it feels like the whole world is standing still
I love the way u say i love you before we get off the phone
I love the way we cuddle when we are all alone
I love that i can be myself whenever i'm with you
And i love the way u cheer me up whenever i am blue.
I love ur pretty eyes
And i love it when u smile
And i hope that i can have u in my life 4 quite a while
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2004-04-24 14:07:12]
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Re: I love the way...
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:42:08 PM AEST
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This is really sweet! Good job! I really like this part:
I love ur pretty eyes
And i love it when u smile
And i hope that i can have u in my life 4 quite a while |
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Re: I love the way...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:08:12 PM AEST
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| An enjoyable read, but there is only one thing that I do not care for in this poem. Perhaps if you used a different word other than "blue" it would be better. Other than that, good job! |
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Re: I love the way...
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:59:22 PM AEST
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| Another great poem!.Keep writing!! |
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