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Evoking Love
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:34:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He injects my buried, shattered spirit
With a subtle understanding
Of the heart
And entices me to rise above
The murky depths
To rise and bloom.
He cleanses me
And revives my soul,
Forging thoughts and feelings,
Allowing them to flow
Free
To heal my heart
And evoke my love.
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reilt
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2004-04-24 13:34:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Evoking Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:46:19 PM AEST (User
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Very simple..... eloquent.....
I especially dig the pattern of words. They flow well, but the line length changes. Which is a nice way to go.
Lovely write reilt ; )
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