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Kurenai Yuki ~ Crimson Snow

Contributed by SugimotoYouki on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:35:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

cold, lonesome your dark figure appears
the name they call you speaks scorn
"kyuketsuki", a nameless vampire beeing
created from the shed blood of the purest angel

a once childish, innocent heart
it's snowy white was stained with crimson red
and due the winds of time
turned as pitch black as your wings

gracefully posing in front of the ones to your feet
licking te blood your sacrifice has shed
what beauty veiled by agony
which once so gentle heart, broken under violence

you're the angel of blood
the shadow in the light
abandoned, illegal child
chained to hate and darkness

you're the fear of the pure
bittersweet torture, temptation in person
you slay for hate to smooth the desire
but only love can heal your heart

a name, softly whispered in your ear
what truth does it hold
"Yuki", a person as unreachable as it's name
cold and distant you sure are, but where's the beauty?

once glittery white, dyed to raven black
with the dirt of your sinfull existence
in a broken, abusive world
melting under any gentle touch

pain and hate absorption keeps you alive
your own mirror reflection you seem to hunt
someday it'll come to tear you apart
falsely seen as a narcissist, but you only hate yourself...

Copyright © SugimotoYouki ... [ 2004-04-24 10:35:26]
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Re: Kurenai Yuki ~ Crimson Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:46:35 AM AEST
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Bitter sweet poem it holds a certain charm but to be honest it is not my kind of poetry perhaps I am too much of a romantic to be really impressed by this poem however good it is. Sorry

bernard

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