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Just 1
Contributed by
devil_child
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:07:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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just 1 shot
to the head
just 1 pill
and i'll be dead
just 1 stab
slice or cut
just 1 blow to the gut
just 1 fight
just 1 slap
for me to say
screw all this crap
I don't need
2 months, 2 years
I don't need
these worries or fears
I just need
1 gun, 1 knife
to do it now
to end my life
then all of this would disappear
all this pain
all this fear
it seems so easy
almost like fun
no mess to clean up
when i'm done
before I do it
before I go
I thought there's something
you should know
I happend to make
a starling find
there's also just 1 word
that could change my mind
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devil_child
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2004-04-24 01:07:57]
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Re: Just 1
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:28:18 AM AEST
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| Wow powerful! Hope things are better! |
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Re: Just 1
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by PoeticReign on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:32:04 AM AEST
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i'm curious... what's the one word you found that would change your mind to ending your life??
i hope you found a reason to start another day of life...
~P.R. |
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Re: Just 1
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:05:00 AM AEST
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| Wow! What a strong poem! I loved it! It flowed so well and ryhemed so well!!!! Very well written. I hope to read more from you... |
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