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''Into the Deep White''
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:55:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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White, white everywere
I turn to the left, I turn to the right
Everywhere white, white
I look forward I look behind
White, white everywhere
It's peaceful, it's scary, its exciting all at once.
Everywhere white, white
Not knowing were to go.
All senses gone, all direction lost.
White, white everywere
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StoneAngel
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2004-04-23 23:55:02]
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Re: ''Into the Deep White''
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 12:07:43 AM AEST
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Hey Laina,
I like it... can't wait to read more from you. Nice to see we have something else in common girl. :) Welcome to the site! |
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Re: ''Into the Deep White''
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by SugimotoYouki on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:30:01 AM AEST
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even though it can be frightened sometime indeed, snow is such a beautyful thing...
this also is, how I got ym name *smiles gently*
go on writing like this, it has a lot of power |
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Re: ''Into the Deep White''
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:51:34 AM AEST
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Vivid and encouraging. I like the way you speed up your rhythm with the object of attention (ie, snow). Good write.
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