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Bon Fire
Contributed by
patar420
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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yelling voices
echo across the field
yellow flames jump up
from the sky line
feel the heat
upon my face
inhibitions out the door
run towards the flickering fire
dance with the flames
the stars are my music
peoples faces melt away
its just me and the night
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patar420
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2004-04-23 21:27:47]
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Re: Bon Fire
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:16:16 PM AEST
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| Wow good imagery here! |
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Re: Bon Fire
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by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:21:07 PM AEST
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| the flames can be so cleansing.......vivid heat here........ |
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Re: Bon Fire
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:11:37 PM AEST
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reminds me of fun times I once had round fire in the mountains by the river thanks for this write
michelle |
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