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Maybe you should

Contributed by deepdarkthinker on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:18:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



How could you do it
Why did you do it
Does it make you happy to take a pure and precious thing from a child
watching her scream and cry knowing your killing her mentally scarring her for life
Did you know that for the rest of her life she will wake up screaming
afraid of walking down the street or
or ever letting any other man get close to her physically or emotionaly
in case you didn't know
I spent the last 11 years of my life going to phychatery
when I finally relized that i wasnt the one with the problam
I wasnt the one who took a 5 year olds innocence
Maybe u should go to a shrink
and listen to her tell u that your mentally unstable
and your depressed and have to take pills for the rest of your teenage life
and try to get on with your life with scars on your wrists.
Do you see what you've done to me and all you got was 10 years.
I hope i've got my point through
that not only did you hurt me
but you hurt my family and friends to




Copyright © deepdarkthinker ... [ 2004-04-23 20:18:13]
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Re: Maybe you should (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:57:19 PM AEST
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This is a good write! Excellent job!


Re: Maybe you should (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:59:02 PM AEST
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Totally devastating, sad and uncalled for knowing this happens all too commonly in life. Sad for how this poem came about, a good write.




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