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Sultry Dream
Contributed by
Merry
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Breeze stirs the candles to flickering
Glow on bared skin delights
Senses alert to something new
This warm and sultry summer night
Fingers dance across flesh
Invitation to explore
Your whisper in my ear
Telling me you want some more
Moonlight floods the sky
Tenderly we take our time
Tumbling into love’s abyss
Sweat tastes as sweet as wine
Gentle rain sings us to sleep
In this dream we shall rest
Fragrant jasmine fills the air
I rest my head upon your chest
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Merry
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Re: Sultry Dream
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by Black13 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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And what a sultry dream indeed.
This was very be'witching' of a write.
I love the flow of it. It was magnificant.
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Re: Sultry Dream
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:30:41 PM AEST
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mmmm dreamy and sweetly romantic, keep em comin' sis! huggies n' love nessa
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Re: Sultry Dream
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:49:19 PM AEST
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This is your best rhyming write ever!!!
(devil daisy).........hehe
Absolutely beautiful Gaille
Larry |
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Re: Sultry Dream
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by Kie on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:57:15 PM AEST
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Oh this poem fueled my imagination. It reminds me of the carribean. Sunsets and sunrises that are so dramatic you question which one it is. Candles that burn forever, wind that tickles your skin and cools it in the evenings. The whole setting is phenomenal to the senses, to entice love, to awaken dreams and I sure like them sultry.
EXCELLENT Poem!~~~~~~!
Kie |
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Re: Sultry Dream
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:03:17 PM AEST
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Mmmmm, I think it's time for bed.
Even when you're having fun, you write beautifully.
Stitch |
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