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Back To Back
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:11:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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YOUR BACK TO MY BACK
WISH IT WAS ALWAYS LIKE THAT
CAUSE I CAN'T SEEM
TO IMAGINE ME
WITHOUT YOU
YOU'RE ONE OF A FEW
WHO EVER MADE ME SO HAPPY
DON'T MEAN TO BE ALL SAPPY
BUT BOY, YOU GOT ME TO LOVE YOU
AND THAT'S WHAT I WILL DO
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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Re: Back To Back
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:14:49 PM AEST (User
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this is very sweet and upbeat - enjoyed it -
smiles
merry |
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Re: Back To Back
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:15:43 PM AEST (User
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Very true, You beautifully structured
it. And the boy will one day make it home.
Love and wishes for your happiness. |
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Re: Back To Back
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:25:40 PM AEST (User
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sometimes that love is the strongest......the ones we're waiting for.........good write........ |
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Re: Back To Back
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:53:25 PM AEST (User
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This was so fresh and sweet. Very nice words and just the right amount of honest sweetness to not make it sugary.
I enjoyed it immensely.
Kie |
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Re: Back To Back
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:21:35 PM AEST (User
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To wait upon the good things in life...
Is to appreciate them more when they come...
Good wrote... short and to the point... loved it!
~Donna~ |
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