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With her in my head
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My body shakes
From the moment I awake
_____________
They took her away
But once a month
She comes to make my day
While all day I sleep
My body shakes
From the minute I awake
_____________
Starts out
A dream in a land so far away
You know
With friends you shouldn't have anyways
First night back
An old friend babysits for me
While A rally up with the old
Smoking reefer
Getting stoned
With theft and alcohol
To push the bones
After so
Headed back to my son
Driving...S***....
A policeman with a gun
I get neverous
but not enough to run
She stays behind me
with her lights off
Until I run into a glass door
Not shattering the door
The door stops my car
With red lights flashing
I hope I have enough time
To stash my score
She recieve my name
And runs it
Asking me where I'm going
And How did I miss seeing the door
I replied
I'm going over there
on the other side of the door
To pick up my boy
My windows were fogged
And I didn't have my defrost on
While all this she ignored
She had my name
With no warrant aboard
She says we've had some theft
We're just wanting to be sure
___________
The next day running
Around the same block
I told certain people
Of what happend
For I knew the one they
search for
All day I looked for him
Calling around searching everywhere
Then finally close to dusk
As I'm at a convienent store
I see him walking
I yell out his name
He looks but continues on his way
I run, I catch up to him
In his hurried pace
I try to talk to him
but he keeps walking with his bag
I relay the story of the night before
Telling him the things
That happend after I left his porch
(His porch being a bar in a shopping center
that is 1/4 of the location of the dream)
I told him as we walked
Then seeing an officer
he hands me his bag
I know what to do
He takes off one way
As I stroll
Keeping an eye on the patrol
The officer proceeds to take a left
Unaware of what I had
I cross the hiway
Trying to keep an eye
I witness the office make his u turn
I duck in to an over hang on a bank
I toss the bag into the garbage can
And continue on my way
To the closes restruant
Once inside most of
The residents knew me
As some asked of the things they knew
___________
Then by one I got my a** chewed
Now this one was different
From all else of the dream
This girl I couldn't even tell you her name
She scolded me
Telling me
The friend
(Crystal) who was babysitting for me
Was to young for me
(In the dream I was 19.
That would of made her 16.
Know in the real I've known Crystal
Since I was 12)
Well this girl hounded me
And my only reply was
I've known her for seven years
I don't think I've ever
Even tried to kiss her.
But she continued
Upon the attraction
That I was unaware of.
(This intersession felt like
I was defending myself)
Next thing's next
I see a detective walking to the door
I try to duck out the side
But for some reason
She didn't go in
And we enter the side parking lot
At the same time
She walks to me
As concoiusly I form
My composure
She tells me her name
And hands me her card
(the signifacants of the card?)
The card was a clear plastic
appearing only her name
(the signifacants of the card?)
We walked around the block
Talking as she fished for revelations
We parted as aquaintances
Walking away strong
Not knowing if we opposed
Or stood together
After that I hit the bar
(my buddies porch)
Ordered a beer
And drink it
with the slow sound
Of Charlie Brown's teacher
coming from the bartend
Following that I walk back
to the restraunt
As I made it to the door
There is a table outside
Sitting 9TO5 people
One of which I knew
(she's not a 9to5 person)
She had short blonde hair
A white top on
I got a smirk
And I slightly raise my hand
in acknowledgement
She just smile like she didn't notice
So I proceed inside to deal
With my business
Finally being able to talk to my buddy
I tell him where his bag is
I tell him what I know
He tells me about last night
How some of his buddies
Tried to rob that bank
Unfortunitly he states
There was a roofing crew
working there
The cops where called
but everyone got away
Once we where thru
With our conversation
He gave to me
Some trinkets
I don't remember what the contents were
(A poem, some small piece of paper,
A pencil or something like that
And a few more other items)
I soon enter another conversation
With an extra that just wanted to talk
From the back room
The door a sliver
I hear
"Put it in the a**"
First thought MDMA (not that I would!)
Well the extra and I continued to talk
About nothing
(In reference: I don't remember.)
Some people emerged
From the back room
And making it to the door
I see her
So I grab the door in front of her hand
And she looks at me
With the biggest smile
I look at her and say
What you can't say hi?
Just wave or show me
You see me when I walk by
What are talking about?
She replied
Outside, What You Didn't See Me
When I Walked In.
She says
I've been in the back
watching pornos
Do you want to watch
Just then I looked up and saw
She smiled at me
I smiled at her
____________
Then I awake
My body it shakes
____________
I can't believe I snapped at her
Never in the real such a thing happend
____________
It's been four years now
But she visits me
____________
I believe she apart of me
My angel watching me
Sometimes I can hear her
Soft songs in the winds
Like she's singing to me
Once again
____________
I feel her presence
And think of her when I'm down
____________
She was always there
To lift up my frown
____________
Hundreds of mile
Days and months we would
Find each other
Over the mountains and across the plains
We were one
And I love the days
When she finds me laid
Across the bed
etching thru dreams
With her in my head
These are the days
I like to lay in bed
Etching thru dreams
With her in my head
____________
My soft angel
Keeps me alive
Even when I want to be dead
____________
She's my everything
And I await to be with her
____________
It's been four years
But I think and dream of
Her everyday.
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-04-23 17:59:55]
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Re: With her in my head
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by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:16:07 PM AEST
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| very profound experience..........only you can know the true significance........yes.....though......i do believe in angels.....soul spirits that visit periodically....... |
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Re: With her in my head
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by Kie on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:47:01 PM AEST
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I think you did an excellent job on this poem. You really improved with this one. I liked the line breaks so it didn't run together and it made strong statements, expressed feelings thru words, your spelling was so much better, no caps and honestly I thought it was really well written.
You obviously have talent and you are really going to shine. Remember me when your famous!
Well done...
Kie |
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